Amazing buildup of affection,
She is an iconic vigor,
Competes with bitter world,
To affirm her existence.
Owns the wings of courage,
Aspires to touch horizon,
Smashes stereotypes,
Eludes the cage of society.
Compiling memoirs of ordeals,
Blazes her woes away,
Reflects gracious smile,
And utters words in appraisal.
Illustrates a glorious extent,
Prompting decisive impulses,
Attempts to fortify her pals
Towards their prospects.
©️Aditi Anvita (Anvi).
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Happy Living!❤
This is amazing, Anvi. So beautiful, I love each line 🖤🤗🤍
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It’s a nicely done poem. One point of feedback (you can ignore it if you don’t want it), “molds smile on her lips” conjures an image of mold (bread mold versus mold like to shape). Otherwise the other lines work well.
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Thanks for this crucial observation. That’s both typo and a wrong word choice that I didn’t notice before publishing. I am correcting it.
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I’m a terrible self editor, I just let it fly as is, and occasionally I’ll correct and fix an especially egregious error.
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The mistakes are difficult find in one’s own write-ups, I wished if I could forget that I wrote them so that I could observe the mistakes with eagle eyes and correct them before someone else examines.
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“blazes her woes away” – love this phrase!
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Thanks for sharing your views.
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This is powerful and beautiful poem… very well written…
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I am glad to hear from you, thanks😊
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