Nature’s Elegance

Pines laden with pristine snow,
The sunbeams are fascinated,
They dance over the surface,
Chant their favourite lyrics
As the beauty melts in love.

Greatly cheerful echoes induce
Voices, known and unknown
From the middle of woods,
Alarm clocks of beings ring,
Embarks a delightful day.

The morning breeze caresses
The tenderness of skin,
Old torn specks fly away,
New ones spread their arms,
In spirit, cherishing serenity.

The words are exciting,
They flow with fresh wind,
Embracing the atmosphere,
Elegances of nature,
Protrude out a poem.
©️Aditi Anvita (Anvi).

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Happy Living!❤

Garden Walk

Brief walk in garden
A butterfly flies around,
I follow, its way
Settles on bliss of petals,
I smile, I feel gratified.
©️Aditi Anvita (Anvi).

This is my first attempt on Tanka poem, quite similar to haiku as both forms follow a particular syllable count in each line and generally based on nature. The former follows 5-7-5 syllable scheme while later follows 5-7-5-7-7.

I request your feedback on this poem so that I could improve upcoming works in this form.

I thank you all for your kindness, support and encouragement. Happy Living!❤