Scorching sun outside
Tiny sparrows endeavour
Savour ripe mangoes.
©️Aditi Anvita (Anvi).
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Nice haiku, capturing both the sparrow and the ripeness of the fruit to create a full scene in just a few lines.
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Truly pleased that the poem is with that ultimate feature of Haiku.
The poem sprouted in one of my observations in a mango field.
Thank you so much for sharing your views.
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Beautiful. ❤️
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I am glad to that you liked it. Thank you so much😊
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I did, indeed, you’re very welcome Aditi. 😊
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A vivid picture of sparrows enjoying their food – just as we do. Are we so different?
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First of all, sparrows are one of the endangered species (struggling to survive, only a few of them can be seen as their number has declined) so their glimpse was blissful.
I think that we are a lot different from sparrows as our lives are much convenient.
We know how to cook our food from the easily available ingredients but, they have to wander long distances, and work hard to get theirs.
Thanks for reading and commenting
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Very nice
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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